Final Re-write
Hi In this week's assignment, we were required to rewrite a blog and use the articles or the feedback given to us as a guide to improve our work and make it up to a better standard. When re-writing a blog I didn't receive any feedback this week so to complete this task I had to use the articles provided to complete this assignment. While reading these articles I found them very helpful and can apply these tips to my future blogs and any writing that I might do in the future. One of the articles that I read was called ‘Active versus passive voice. From reading this article I feel I have learned a lot. At the very beginning of this article, I read that an active voice is used for most non-scientific writing. Using an active voice for the majority of your sentences makes your meaning clear for readers, and keeps the sentences from becoming too complicated or wordy. Even in scientific writing, too much use of passive voice can cloud the meaning of your sentences. I also found this...