Another Revision

 Hi,


This week we were given feedback from our peers and using the given feedback we were asked to re-write our original pieces but to apply the feedback to our work so that hopefully our work will improve and we can learn from our mistakes for future assignments.


Overall this week the feedback that I received from three people was very positive and had very little improvement to do for this week's task. I enjoyed hearing what I had done that was good in my blogs and I feel it also keeps me motivated to continue to write because I know that although there are things that I could improve on I also know that there are strong parts in my blog.


My positive feedback included things such as:

  • Good Grammar and Punctuation.
  • That the blog was based on my opinions and backed up with facts.
  • It was easy to follow due to the structure and layout.
  • Good flow to the blog due to going from one topic to the next.
  • Was straight to the point.


I was very happy with this feedback and will do my best to make sure that I continue to use this feedback and apply it to my writing in every assignment to keep a good standard in my work across all modules.


As far as negative feedback / Constructive criticism goes I didn't receive much to be able to apply a lot to my next assignment or any future assignments that I may have. I did however receive 2 small pieces of constructive criticism that I feel will benefit my writing.


My negative feedback included:

  • The intro of my blog was very speech-like.
  • The intro was also very unnecessary and could have been skipped.


I feel that if I have received more negative feedback I would have benefited from this more and could have done a lot more to improve my work, but the positive feedback has motivated me.

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